Thank you for the lesson « my vanilla world

  The title made me wonder "what lesson

  The "hook". Notice how this line stands alone. And the direct
  concise way of writing

  Consider the author's choice of words: "tearing through

  The linkage to "lessons", i.e. even in death the deceased was
  still in a position to teach others

  Overall comments: The writing is in sequence but the use of
  white space, the logical sequence and insertion of commentaries/
  reflection - the flow just makes the reading continue to the end
 
 - Thank you for the lesson « my vanilla world
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